Have you wondered why natural disasters are so dangerous like a storm or a tornado? They cause floods, house loose, death and landslides.
Why they are so dangerous? Facts about natural disasters.
1. In hurricane Ian it flooded bit but there could be worse hurricanes.
2. Some volcanos can cause ashes but these ashes may fly up to cover the sky which can cause cold winters.
3. Tsunami one time in 1958, Alaska was hit by a 1700 foot tsunami. It became the big tsunami to hit the land. Tsunamis are made by earthquakes, volcanos, and landslides.
4. Earthquakes, if one happens hide under a table with foods and water.
This is why I think natural disasters are dangerous.
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Feedback From Her Teacher : Your writing is OK. But, you should follow my instructions. I said to you guys to write using Introduction โ Explanation โ Conclusion.
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I totally agree. I don’t correct her English grammar. ๐ In my opinion, she uses “storm” and “tornado” as examples at the beginning. She should only explain “storm” and “tornado”. If the title is types of natural disasters, she should write like,
Introduction: Have you ever wondered why natural disasters are so dangerous? I know there are hurricanes/storms, tornadoes, volcanos, earthquakes, and tsunamis…
Explanation : 1 โ Tornado โ 2 โ 4 โ 3
Conclusion๏ผ…so I think natural disasters are dangerous.
Every week she has writing assignments. I will post another essay next time. ๐
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